高三写作课探索

Writing letters

Learning objectives: after the lesson, you are expected to :

1、consolidate(巩固) the sentence patterns of six intentions through presentation and a785bpetition.

2、avoid mistakes in writing by showing and correcting mistakes in sentences.

3、make your writing logical(有逻辑的).

课前预习：

Task 1 Review  Write down different polite sentence patterns

Suggest:________________________________________________________________

Thank:_________________________________________________________________ Apologize:______________________________________________________________

Introduce:______________________________________________________________

Ask for help:____________________________________________________________

Invite:_________________________________________________________________

Consult/ask for information:________________________________________________

课中探究

1.分析范文

2016年成都市一诊

假定你是李华，你校将于2017 年元旦节在学校体育馆组织一次义卖活动。请根据以下要点给你校外教John 写一封信，邀请他一同参加。

1. 活动介绍（时间、地点、物品等）；

2. 活动意义；

3. 盼回复参与意向

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

4.文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。

参考词汇：义卖活动charity sale；体育馆stadium

Dear John,

  How is everything going?___________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hua

Sample:

Dear John,

How is everything going? Knowing that you are enthusiastic about charity activities, I am writing to invite you to join us in a charity sale.

It will be held at the school stadium at 8 a.m. on New Year’s Day, 2017, lasting 4 hours. A variety of items are wela785bed,ranging from books, earphones and handicrafts to home-made cakes.

This activity can bring about various benefits. It can help raise charity awareness and cultivate the habit of helping others. Besides, this is also a precious chance to develop our ability to design and organize activities.

Please let me know whether you will a785be or not as soon as possible.

Looking forward to your reply!(108 words)

                                                                Yours,

                                                                Li Hua

Intention:____________________________________________________________

Brief introduction(time,place,&stuffs):_______________________________      Meaning/ Aim:_________________________________________________________

Participation/Ending:____________________________________________________

2. Proof reading

1. There is a charity sale in my school on the first day of the new year. (时态）

2. The activity will be hold in the stadium.（语态）

3. It last one day. ( 时态、主谓一致）

4. Furthermore, you can also bring something you don’t need... Maybe, there will be some students need that. (出现双谓语）

5.The students will sale their books which they won’t need them any more.(词性错误，定语从句中出现的错误）

6.When you a785be, you will see all kinds of things. For example, having clothes, having tools, books and so on. (中文式表达）

3.模仿写作

(2016课标全国II)

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间；

3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.a785b.

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

审题：

Intention?

How many points?

Well- organized structure:

Transitional words&sentences you can use from the Sample above: